Oak Class (pupils age 12-14) has begun the term with a creative writing block. In the first week pupils explored the relationship between prose and poetry, 'translating' one into the other. Simple words and ideas were combined, associated with the four elements, to help conjure fresh and sometimes startling images, as in the poem by one pupil below:
Invisible Suffocation
Invisible suffocation -
Heavy breathing surrounds me.
I can hardly move in the clay air.
I see my pain in many colours,
Fiery liquid flowing through my veins,
Blazing as I fade into the unknown.
I feel the throbbing life leave me,
A worming tornado is tearing me apart.
I am drowning in fire.
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